Comments on [Glimmer Creek] - Ollie Tiller in Azzaru Expeditions



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Expedition Approval: https://itona.io/submissions/view/1593

Primary Handler: https://itona.io/user/MoonRazor
Bonuses: Trio Handling

Hounds: S-00041
Instincts: Packmate
Bonuses: -

Hounds: K-00011
Instincts: Biddable
Bonuses: -

Hounds: K-00050
Instincts: -
Bonuses: -

Hounds: K-00060
Instincts: -
Bonuses: -

2024-07-08 19:12:51

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EXPEDITION SUMMARY

Expedition Approval: https://itona.io/submissions/view/1593

Primary Handler: https://itona.io/user/MoonRazor
Bonuses: Trio Handling

Hounds: S-00041
Instincts: Packmate
Bonuses: -

Hounds: K-00011
Instincts: Biddable
Bonuses: -

Hounds: K-00050
Instincts: -
Bonuses: -

Hounds: K-00060
Instincts: -
Bonuses: -

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Bonus art:
https://itona.io/gallery/view/891
https://itona.io/gallery/view/892
https://itona.io/gallery/view/893
https://itona.io/gallery/view/894
https://itona.io/gallery/view/895
https://itona.io/gallery/view/900
https://itona.io/gallery/view/901

Total Wordcount
792

Loot:
Mature Candleweed
Berdir Pelt
Azzaruan Plant

Bonus Prompt
https://itona.io/gallery/view/955

Bonus Prompt Rewards
1x Expedition Rolls
3x Randomized Ore Rolls
1x Berdir Hunt Tag

Training
S-00041: 7x5 art + 6 lit + 6 bonus prompt = 47
K-00011: 7x5 art + 6 lit + 6 bonus prompt = 47
K-00050: 7x5 art + 6 lit + 6 bonus prompt = 47
K-00060: 7x5 art + 6 lit + 6 bonus prompt = 47

2024-07-15 01:53:40 (Edited 2024-07-17 09:04:07)

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Roll 7/7
Bonus art: https://itona.io/gallery/view/901
Word count: 159 (total 792)
Loot:
Mature Candleweed
Berdir Pelt
Azzaruan Plant

"Does it feel... like there are eyes everywhere?" Ollie asked, looking around as they walked. Roadstead and Sunshower looked up at him curiously, while Icarus and Catamaran remained blissfully unaware, trotting along without a care in the world.

"I feel like over there," he said, pointing toward the steep valley sides. "I've got a good feeling about this."

With the hounds in tow, he left the creek's edge and headed toward the edges of the valley, which rose high above them, stretching toward the sky. "I could be wrong, but best to check, right?" he said, peering about curiously. Perhaps they would spot something unusual.

But it didn't seem meant to be. Much as he tried to fight the vegetation, Ollie soon found that the shrub was simply too thick, catching on his clothes and clawing him back as he tried to push his way through. "I guess not," he said with a plaintive smile, finally abandoning his attempts.

Chosen roll:
2 -- The scrub gets too thick to make any more progress.

2024-07-09 21:42:42 (Edited 2024-07-15 01:36:19)

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Your handler hikes up the side of the valley, into some scrubby brush to investigate what's up there.


Roll -- Result
1 -- Your handler wanders around a bit, and comes across a small smeared foot print.
2 -- The scrub gets too thick to make any more progress.
3 -- Your handler nearly turns an ankle on a twisted root.
4 -- Event! -- A berdir bursts from the scrub, and begins to run. Submit a claim to follow!
5 -- Your Hound hovers over a hole in the valleyside. Perhaps a duskrat lives there ...
6 -- Your handler looks around, and notices a Duskrat Tail Feather.
7 -- Your Hound startles a duskrat from its hiding place. Receive a Duskrat Hunt Tag.
8 -- Your handler hikes around for a while, but doesn't find anything of interest.
9 -- Your Hound keeps rushing ahead, but you manage to call them back. Receive +5 training on this expedition.
10 -- Event! -- Under a scrubby tree your handler notices a little garden of herbs. Submit a claim to investigate.
11 -- Something runs through the brush, but your handler can't make it out.
12 -- Your handler spends several hours hiking around the valley, but eventually returns to the creek.
13 -- Your handler notices a tuft of fur caught on a bush, but isn't sure what left it there.
14 -- Your Hound begins to lose interest, and starts to wander back to the creek.
15 -- Your handler finds a good vantage point, but doesn't catch sight of anything interesting.
16 -- Your handler finds a nice tree and spends some time in its shade.
17 -- Event! -- As your handler creeps forward they catch sight of a melanistic berdir. Submit a claim to attempt to follow!
18 -- Your handler is suddenly face-to-face with a berdir, but it bolts away before anything can happen.
19 -- The feeling of begin watched never goes away, but your handler can't find the source.
20 -- Event -- Your handler hears a bark!?! And it wasn't their Hound. Submit a claim to investigate.

2024-07-09 21:28:20

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Roll 6/7
Bonus art: https://itona.io/gallery/view/900
Word count: 101 (total 633)
Loot:
Mature Candleweed
Berdir Pelt
Azzaruan Plant

They had gone quite a ways, with base camp far out of sight, and Sunshower, Roadstead, Icarus and Catamaran seemed to be enjoying the long trek. The young ones had calmed down quite a bit and fallen into step behind the more experienced hounds, and the five of them wandered alongside the creek.

"Is it just me, or does it look like there's more and more ore to be found out here?" Ollie said out loud, to nobody in particular. He peered at the water, which bubbled and ran across what he thought were traces of rock. "Let's look over here."

Chosen roll:
13 -- Event -- Your handler feels like they are being watched from the valley sides ... Submit a claim to attempt to investigate.

2024-07-09 17:57:17 (Edited 2024-07-09 17:57:37)

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The ore on the creek bottom seems to get more and more concentrated with each step your handler takes.


Roll -- Result
1 -- Event! -- Your handler bends down a picks up a sizeable Ore Chunk.
2 -- Your handler slips on a slimy rock in the creek and ends up in the water.
3 -- Your handler notices a piece of Dark Ore that glimmers slightly.
4 -- Your Hound dashes off ahead, and startles a berdir! Receive a Berdir Hunt Tag.
5 -- Your handle notices a bright piece of Silvery Ore, that is a good size.
6 -- Your handler notices a beautiful Glittering Ore Chunk!
7 -- Event! -- Your handler can see a cave up ahead. Submit a claim to investigate.
8 -- A grouping of Azzaruan Plants near the creek catches your handler's eye.
9 -- Your Hound streaks off ahead, a takes quite a long while to return.
10 -- The creek seems to stretch on ahead for much further than your handler is willing to walk.
11 -- Your handler notices a grouping of Ore Chunks, and scoops them up.
12 -- Your Hounds start to grow restless. Time to move on.
13 -- Event -- Your handler feels like they are being watched from the valley sides ... Submit a claim to attempt to investigate.
14 -- Your handler starts to lose concentration, and heads back towards camp.
15 -- Your Hounds start to drift away. You call them back. Receive +2 training for this expedition.
16 -- Your handler concludes that this is just a small concentration patch of ore.
17 -- Your Hound brings back an Ore Chunk. Helpful.
18 -- Your Hound perks up, and started barking at something on the slope.
19 -- Your handler can hear something moving around in the brush on the slope, but can't make anything out.
20 -- Event -- Your handler seems to have identified a source of ore! They must report it to Roderick. Submit a claim to see your results.

2024-07-09 11:00:19